Show don’t Tell!!!

Hiya bloggers! How are ya?

Today, I am sharing one of my show don’t tell paragraphs that I have done this week.

Are you ready?

She felt immense pain. Her eyes squinted as a short scream was unleashed. Her biggest toe collided with an uneven part in the rocky concrete. Slowly, it started to swell and her veins appeared to rise. Small drops of blood splattered onto the pathway.

What do you think i’m trying to show?

Blog ya later, Lyla!

Novel ponder extra!

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Today we have a ponder to do!

You ready?

One piece of advice I would give my younger self to keep going with whatever I do, because I will do well and reach my goal eventually.

Another piece of advice I would give is to join gymnastics earlier and that if I keep going with it I will someday come to compete. (Like now 🏅)

What advice would you give to your younger self?

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Time travelers!⌛

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Today we have a ponder based on Amorangi and Millie’s trip through time…

Here’s the ponder!

Easy question!

I’m definitely going to the Renaissance era, around 1300-1700 BCE

It would be fun to experience people when they had tomatoes thrown at them, I might even want to try having them thrown at me!

In those times if girls could be knights I would be one of them, riding my house and holding and weapon.

What would you be in what era?

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🖼 DA FIBONACCI🖌🎨

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I have some art to share with you!

With the Fibonacci artwork we create a spiral from: 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34 and so on. The way the pattern works is by adding the two previous numbers together.

This is my art, there is a spiral leading from the back of it’s neck to the end of his trunk.

What does your recent artwork look like?

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😢Boy in the girls bathroom ponder (Last one)😭

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We have the last boy in the girls bathroom ponder to do😭

But don’t worry we’ll have more books to ponder about!☺

ANYWAY…

The part of the boy in the girls bathroom that surprised me the most is when the story flipped and Colleen walked into the boys bathroom! 😂

This book didn’t really give me a strong emotion as I don’t relate to parts of the story, except the part where Bradley and Jeff weren’t friends and then when the became friends again Jeff introduced Bradley to his other group of friends.

What was you favorite part in this story?

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Novel ponder 8!

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Today we have yet another novel ponder!

Let’s do this!

When Carla was writing the letter, I feel she probably felt sad, and she might have even been crying. Carla’s letter will encourage Bradley to go to Collin’s party because he would be doing it for her.

What do you think?

Do you think that Bradley will go to Collin’s party

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Book ponder 4!

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Today we’ve got a book ponder to do!

Are you ready?

Bradley talks to his toys because he feels a bit lonely, and in real life he can’t

control anybody but with his toys he can control anyone.

I think Ronnie might represent his sister, Claudia (I think) As he gives Ronnie a

shrill voice and makes her do weird stuff.

Do you play with you toys like Bradley?

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Poetry fun! 🌊

Hiya bloggers! How are ya? ✋

Today i’ll be reflecting on my poems that I have been working on for a couple weeks. You ready?🤔

                   I think a great poem is one that uses great Wow words,                  

it should be interesting and use a bit of show don’t tell
once in awhile or maybe a metaphor.

What do you think a great poem is?
Blog ya later, Lyla 😁