Hiya bloggers! How are ya?
Today, I am sharing one of my show don’t tell paragraphs that I have done this week.
Are you ready?
She felt immense pain. Her eyes squinted as a short scream was unleashed. Her biggest toe collided with an uneven part in the rocky concrete. Slowly, it started to swell and her veins appeared to rise. Small drops of blood splattered onto the pathway.
What do you think i’m trying to show?
Blog ya later, Lyla!
Hi Lyla, Its Noa from room 21 your show don’t tell was amazing just by reading it I can tell she/he has subbed there toe😵I’m did show don’t tell for writing as well bye blog you later
Noa.
Kia Ora Noa! Thanks for commenting.
What did you do for your show don’t tell? Can I see some of it?
Blog ya later, Lyla!